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This is way early (Friday is the paper release date), but it's my birthday, and I'll post if I want to. That, and I doubt there's much school paper / DA watcher overlap at this point.

While I was considering going for a more sketchy style ( [link] ), I decided I'm not ready to do that just yet, if ever for this. At the very least I think I'll stick to more of an ink-like look.

Ok, as for what's going on in the comic itself. This is the sort of gag that I think is somehow less dirty with the gender roles reversed. It's a double standard, I know, but I think it would be considered more dirty if Tori was a guy drawing a woman streaking through the mall. Any disagreement on this would actually be refreshing ^^;

Oh, and for those wondering about how messy Tori appears? Well, she's working with charcoal. That stuffs MESSY, and Tori doesn't mind. I do, however. I go out of my way to only get one hand dirty, and to keep the rest of me charcoal free. I don't always succeed, but I try.

Panel by panel:

Panel 1: Tori's fierceness while drawing is an exaggerated version of the vigorous drawing style of someone actually in the life drawing class I'm taking. One time he drew in red, and I stated that he had attacked the paper and his drawing was the result of the paper bleeding.

Panel 2: Tori's pose in panel 1 was pretty much precisely what I wanted, but I realized that I just made her drawing with her left hand and I'd already drawn panel 3 with the charcoal in her right hand. It's a happy accident, as it makes her seem all the more wild with her drawing style.

Panel 3: This panel, in my opinion, looks so much better than the others, and I think it's because I sketched it off of the computer (the rest is 100% computer generated). I think I just get better results with sketching off the computer, but it is more time consuming just account on scanning alone.

Panel 4: This is based on two things, the first being that I occasionally get tired of drawing the literal interpretation of what's in front of me. I'd rather use the model as a reference and make something new. The second is that there is a shortage of male models for my life drawing class, and I figure Tori would get tired of always drawing women.

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:icondragoniangirl:
Very nice. There was someone in my life drawing class that had a tendancy to take some artistic licence with her drawings. She mainly made them into furries though. :?

And for some reason the first panel makes me think of Death Note. >.>

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"Billy has more toys than me!"
"Who's Billy?"
"I don't know, but he has more toys than me!"
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Dressing boys in drag NEVER gets old. ^.^
:icontaigan:
I suspect her artistic license is about to be revoked. :roll:

...and while I can certainly imaging a female artist getting tired of drawing female models all the time; some people, given her choice of imagery and the energy with which she draws it, might suspect that Tori's frustration is not entirely artistic in nature. Not saying I suspect that. But some people might. ^^;

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:iconchaospriest:
I don't know, I think that joke comes off as dirty no matter what.
:iconlost-angle:
guy or girl streaking.. either one is weird and refreshing to hear, though a guy drawing a girl would be less politically correct :P I dislike that though, I don't see what the big difference is...

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Life is full of questions, such as "where are the answers?"
:iconwill2bill:
I want to draw like that
*KER-SKETCH*...Nope, All i get is a ridiculous black line on my page.

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I am a complexly divisive individual capable of a lot of little perplexities that to many have meaning no greater than that of a small gnat. However, to a particularly few I weave a web of scalpels, sown together with fine wine and cheese.
:iconwakeangel2001:
ugh, I hated drawing with Charcoal, it didn't stick to the paper and got EVERYWHERE.
:iconneko-hime-cfi:
whenever i did charcoal stuff i got it everywhere...she is far too clean. XD

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= 3 = /)~~~~~:heart:

OBLIGITORY STEIN RAEP WHUUUUUUUUUUUUUUT?! DDDD:
:icongorfanel:
I like the girl xDDDD

maybe she is ambidextrous? anyway, the charcoal passing from one hand to another is cool ^^
:icongclaw4444:
so what did you first study?

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:iconfoxby:
I love Tori's look in that last panel. xP

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I'm a feminist because it gets me laid.

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