This is another one of those drawings where I feel like "alright, I did an awesome job and I've gotta share this!", but ALSO feel like "oh man, people are gonna give me weird looks for this one..."
Elements of this image exist because I had an idea for a short story, others exist because I wanted to practice proportions, anatomy, and other art-type stuff, and others exist because I knew a friend of mine would appreciate them.
I'd say this is probably THE BEST pencil drawing I've ever done, even before a small cleanup in Photoshop. Therefore, odd as it may be, it's getting posted.
Also both good and annoying is that all I used was an H6 pencil for the base and a mechanical 0.7 pencil for the rest. This is good because it's simple, but annoying because I have two really good sets of drafting pencils and the mechanical pencil seems to have outperformed all the pencils in those sets put together
Anyway, to make CERTAIN I get those weird looks, here's a story to go with it.
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A woman intent on shoplifting wanders the mall looking for a good place to snag stuff from. She doesn't intend to pawn the goods that she swipes or really gain anything of value; she just loves taking things. Unfortunately, even with her trusty trench coat, just about every place has visible security measures in place.
Then she finds an odd store, one that claims to sell items of power and intrigue from around the world and created by the owner. She doesn't much care about that, but many of the things for sale are small, shiny, and best of all, there are no apparent security devices anywhere.
Quietly filling the coats interior pockets with trinkets, she stealthily makes her way out the door. She thinks she's in the clear, but can't help feeling that something is wrong. People are looking at her and the mall looks larger than she remembered, but she can't figure out why.
What she doesn't realize is that by leaving the store without paying, she's set off a magic alarm that will shrink her down to to 8% of her normal size to make her easier to apprehend and detain, and that she will be unable to realize this is happening until she inevitably trips on her own relatively huge clothes, which is bound to happen any second now.
Let this be a lesson to all: just because you can't see security measures doesn't mean they're not there.
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Weird looks? Anybody? THERE we go ^_^
Anyway, I mentioned proportions and such? Well, she's supposed to be at half her normal size in this image, so that coat is intended to be 200% normal size relative to her. I used a reference for scale, and essentially just doubled every measurement. I tried to take into account that she can't fill it out at her size, but since people wearing clothes way too freaking huge for them are uncommon, I didn't really have a reference to work from
Hmm, cool idea, really is, just, I dunno, its missing a lot in my opinion. Ok case and point
You said she's in a mall right, so she should be standing on something, and their for the larger coat would be much more folded up over its self. Specially at the base. (Is that supposed to be a boot sticking out by the way?)
Also, I feel as if the coats to snug at the top, like, it fits her then its just way to long. (And she would have to be floating to really get what your image is showing, ya get me?)
I think the you were on the right track in the torso area, just I think a few more folds would be nice falling over the belt, ya know. Also make it buldge out just a little more, trying to make it look much more spacious than it should be in there.
ah the mechanical pencil, thats my main tool. granted thats the only tool I have. besides maybe the sharpie I can never find... but I think that doesn't really count.
also I like the premise on this picture, very fine work you did there.
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XD I love the plotline that goes with the drawing. ^^ Sounds like fun. 8D
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That's actually a platform shoe sticking out, which is one of the elements for that friend of mine. She's in mid-step during this, hence it sticking out, though I fully admit to not using a reference so her legs could easily be off.
Actually, I think given her size, the coat shouldn't be able to stay up at all as most of the weight is lower and would pull it down, but I was going for a clean image and wanted to make certain she stayed covered. Granted, I could've just made her less shrunk, but I was lazy about the proportion practice and wanted it at double size
I'm not sure why she would be standing on something... do you just mean there should be a background? I agree with that, but I was worried about messing up the image. If not, I'm confused as she's supposed to be walking.
The size of the coat, I believe, is proper given the reference I used. There probably should be more wrinkles... actually, there definitely should be. I interpreted the fabric as being the sort that would flow less, and I think it works in some of the places, but not so much at the bottom there.
Ok, here's what a gotta do. Make an actual TFMote, find a willing model and a trenchcoat and get some reference photos. Now I just gotta find a battery that runs on pure magic...
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but i love the detail!
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You said she's in a mall right, so she should be standing on something, and their for the larger coat would be much more folded up over its self. Specially at the base. (Is that supposed to be a boot sticking out by the way?)
Also, I feel as if the coats to snug at the top, like, it fits her then its just way to long. (And she would have to be floating to really get what your image is showing, ya get me?)
I think the you were on the right track in the torso area, just I think a few more folds would be nice falling over the belt, ya know. Also make it buldge out just a little more, trying to make it look much more spacious than it should be in there.
granted thats the only tool I have.
besides maybe the sharpie I can never find... but I think that doesn't really count.
also I like the premise on this picture, very fine work you did there.
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-_O: ...Would you care for a cup of tea?
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"Humans are bastards, but frankly, compared to the rest of reality, they're small-timers." - the world of darkness
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"We were considering sending NINJAS after you guys to make you stop fighting to prevent WWI, but we don't have ninjas. We could hire some from Japan! Russia would know about that! OH BURN!" Bearpelt, Ottoman Empire ambassador for History assignment
Actually, I think given her size, the coat shouldn't be able to stay up at all as most of the weight is lower and would pull it down, but I was going for a clean image and wanted to make certain she stayed covered. Granted, I could've just made her less shrunk, but I was lazy about the proportion practice and wanted it at double size
I'm not sure why she would be standing on something... do you just mean there should be a background? I agree with that, but I was worried about messing up the image. If not, I'm confused as she's supposed to be walking.
The size of the coat, I believe, is proper given the reference I used. There probably should be more wrinkles... actually, there definitely should be. I interpreted the fabric as being the sort that would flow less, and I think it works in some of the places, but not so much at the bottom there.
Ok, here's what a gotta do. Make an actual TFMote, find a willing model and a trenchcoat and get some reference photos. Now I just gotta find a battery that runs on pure magic...
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